VerySmokey

The new revamped story of the Golden Gate series has finally been published! This story has some niche ideas from the
          	Gate and GG, but it goes beyond different, allowing you, the reader, to see something finally different. The next chapter will come 
          	soon for y'all to read!!

LuckyPoe

@VerySmokey "Protect the Pilot"
          	  
          	  "BT!!!!!" 
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VerySmokey

The new revamped story of the Golden Gate series has finally been published! This story has some niche ideas from the
          Gate and GG, but it goes beyond different, allowing you, the reader, to see something finally different. The next chapter will come 
          soon for y'all to read!!

LuckyPoe

@VerySmokey "Protect the Pilot"
            
            "BT!!!!!" 
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Ghifaripoop96

W-w-where's Golden Gate??!!!

Ghifaripoop96

Wait i can't click on it... 
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VerySmokey

I'm not dead, just slow with progress. For anyone wondering, I'm redoing only chapters 1 to 4 because people complained about how poorly written they are. I won't post each one individually, but I will publish chapters 1 to 4 together in one announcement. Regarding chapters 23-25, they are still in progress.
          
          For Golden Gates' total revamp, I won't be making any updates on it just now, as I'm still trying to coordinate it with @Fireballsoup. Further Updates, do check my Discord Server to ask more questions.
          
          Link: https://discord.gg/v6HwZJHw

VerySmokey

@Ghifaripoop96 The story has the same name but a different reason, this time u be fairly surpise for what will come.
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Ghifaripoop96

Never mind that's stupid
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Ghifaripoop96

@VerySmokey you know, i think it would be better if the portal was in Chicago or hell why not in the Seattle, its still kinda close to Golden Gate right? 
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Rendan19k

Smoke. Maybe you can update the Golden Gate next chapter.

VerySmokey

@Rendan19k The Golden Gates series is being remade from the ground up, because I don't like how I wrote it tbh, it's basically GK but Gate and the world building is somewhat boring. So my team and I  I are currently making a new storyline for it.
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VerySmokey

With recent developments, Golden Gates will be undergoing a complete story overhaul,including a new setting, major plot adjustments, and full grammar and structure revisions.
          
          I found myself getting bored with how the original story turned out. It lacked something special. But after reviewing the poll results, it's clear that many of you want to see Golden Gates in a better light
          
          For progress updates, and early content drops, feel free to join the server. 

CombineEliteRobert

@VerySmokey god damn it I just finished ts
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omarzkietero

@VerySmokey  ohhh. well, time to reread soon.
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dr_ruuslan

Smokes Golden gate Americans will teach Elves from Kingdom of Elijah modern weapons rifles M16A2 Machine guns and Machine gun M60 Grenades and Grenade launcher and snipers

dr_ruuslan

Smokes. Are you okay?
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dr_ruuslan

Next chapter please
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VerySmokey

After holding a community vote, the results are 81% in favour of fully committing to a complete rewrite of *Chronicles of Two Powers*. As such, we will begin unpublishing all chapters that have not been rewritten to maintain consistency in tone, quality, and plot progression.
          
          The rewritten chapters (currently up to Chapter 7.2) will remain available and continue to be revised and expanded as needed. We’ll also transition from the decimal-style formatting (e.g., 7.1, 7.2) to a straightforward numerical chapter format (Chapter 1, Chapter 2, etc.), streamlining the structure into a coherent narrative with 17+ chapters.
          
           https://discord.gg/YfMCwZcTs7

VerySmokey

ANNOUNCEMENT.
          
          With recent developments in the Chronicle's team, we have been considering halting chapters 50+ (Verdentia Operation Arc) and making a continuation rewrite after chapter 16 and beyond. As further comments by readers within Wattpad shows the lack of a consistent plot and noticable common writing errors. 
          
          To better serve the story and our vision, this is what we're are planning.
          
          A complete rewrite of the series from the ground up,
          Unpublishing older chapters that have not been rewritten,
          A simplified chapter format (e.g., Chapter 1, Chapter 2, instead of 7.1, 7.2, etc.),
          Incorporating all relevant nations and developments from the beginning, so everything feels cohesive and intentional,
          
          QOA.
          
          Q. What will happen to chapters like 30 to 50+? and the current arc.
          
          Answer: They will be unpublished as well. Despite being in a state where my writing has been heavily improved, it would be VERY much confusing for newer Readers to see the state that chronicle as is, to see missing chapters that hasn't been rewritten yet. while having the verdentia arc continue more questions will be raised so it would be more fair to unpublish. UNpublish but not deleted.
          
          Q. What do we get in the Rewrite..
          
          A. A more "Realistic" Nations and more grounded Geopolitical Drama, and combat action that is more intense similiar to WARFARE (2025) and complex characters that would make you hate or love, Not only that we will also add newer chapters (additional) ones that are missing from 2021-2022 this include, Plot and alot of background building as my team began to continue to add more things into the rewrite we had like this concept for plot that takes Nihonkoku Shoukan but in a more realistic ground knowing that this would give us the boost we need to continue on writing this far more interesting story. and i think its our best to make sure that we can make it more cohesive. 
          
          Further Questions you can further ask in my discord server..
          
          Link: https://discord.gg/xWqgG9fbhy