VeryVaily

Working on new chapters and rereading my fan fiction it’s been so long so I’m probably gonna also rework all the chapters making it more fleshed out and improvements

VeryVaily

Working on new chapters and rereading my fan fiction it’s been so long so I’m probably gonna also rework all the chapters making it more fleshed out and improvements

nathaneskell

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Hey dude if you get this I just wanted to ask you when is your Spring break next week I’m probably guessing since he did say it starts soon.
          
          By the way I am curious on how you’ll get revenge or give him revenge because I know he’s not gonna go back to his wife which to be honest I won’t lie I obviously don’t blame Lucas for doing what he does will do but here’s the thing Leo has like every chance to kill the king if she wanted to the same as Sophia Lucas also did have every chance in the world to kill the king but think of it like this what would happen if he killed him his whole family might get killed in the process if he did that how is he supposed to stop the king without a plan to escape.
          
          One things for certain luxury money power will never make you happy I wouldn’t be surprised if Michael actually gets new women to satisfy him and force Sophia and Leo to take care of the children but knowing that they would probably try and believe that Michael still loves them even though I know the truth they’re nothing.

nathaneskell

@VeryVaily so in this idea basically since their souls are one in the same whenever he felt like he was going to die there’s like a giant portal that showed up so he didn’t get his head chopped off and then the figure came out through the portal everyone was scared obviously Michael was scared but because he’s an idiot or I should really just say not the brightest tool in the shed he commanded his Army to shoot arrows at the creature like they are better off throwing twigs at it whenever he realize that wouldn’t work them to aim for Lucas obviously that wouldn’t work because ancient god block it with his hand and this is actually the strongest he’s ever been this is his prime because he has such a strong user.
            
            Perhaps he also talked about on how he sent some people to the shadow realm perhaps he killed A few people from the army and he sent them to the shadow realm he explained possibly.
            
            After that he told him to obliterate which he did do it after that there was nothing left of the kingdom it was all fully destroyed there was no more innocent people in that kingdom it was destroyed off the face of the earth and that’s the start of ancient Egypt he was possibly the first ever pharaoh to.
            
            But that’s your choice on what you would wanna do with that.
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nathaneskell

@VeryVaily @VeryVaily The reason why I was asking you that question is because of this I kind of did think of an idea you might like I’m not too sure I was thinking perhaps you can make a reaction story I know I’ve been suggesting a lot of these but I haven’t seen anyone make a Yu-Gi-Oh story and you feel is older than I am I mean whenever it ended I was born.
            
            And yes I am talking about the first one so I was thinking perhaps for example I could actually see Lucas is actually basically the embodiment of Exodia or at least their souls are one in the same person who’s kind of like the reincarnation.
            
            I have this could also be how ancient Egypt actually became a thing.
            
            Before I say anything I just wanted to mention this if Pegasus knew of any of these victims pass considering he has a loved one he wants to bring back and hearing after what they went through he would most likely be pissed As he loves his family probably more than cartoons which is saying a lot because If you watched Yu-Gi-Oh there are some YouTube videos on it but if you watched the first one you would understand his love for cartoons is unmatched by basically anyone.
            
            But anyways on how we could get the first scene of Lucas Perhaps he could possibly be executed or something happened while he was in the kingdom of being sad but if he’s being executed I can see at some point he just smiles like exodia at everyone who’s watching him either he starts to grow bigger with more muscles and starts turning into him or here’s an alternate idea.
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nathaneskell

@VeryVaily sorry it took me a while to respond but I’m glad that started for you although I haven’t seen the chapter yet but I can wait.
            
            By the way dude I have a question for you what’s your thoughts on Yu-Gi-Oh?
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nathaneskell

Hey dude if you get this comment  maybe you can have Lucas change his whole look and start looking like the doflamingo and he might have the sadism behind it as well and possibly the strength.
          
          Either way what happened to the future will be interesting.

nathaneskell

I mean I could see him getting a new family still looking like Doflamingo this time he’s not gonna take crap from anyone and is actually going to protect his family from the king if he was to go back there.
            
            Which will probably make his old family especially his daughter upset because he’s protecting them.
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VeryVaily

Would you guys like Kokujin to finish soon or keep the fan fic going pls vote/decide 

lordofANTINTR

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@VeryVailykeep that shit going mate
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