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Hi there author! I read your fanfiction and I just wanted to say it was great but you still have things to work on, like the dialogue and the spacing of each paragraphs. (To be short, style on writing) Overall I liked the plot and the uniqueness, especially for your OC. I'm working on my book, and to say at least it felt kinda cringe so I wanted to help another writer. That's all I wanted to say good luck writing <33