
Speechless_poetess
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Hey, I wonder if you can check out this new poem collection and leave your feedback as it will help a lot to improve my writing? If this message offends you in any way then I apologise for the same. Feel free to delete it from your message board. Thank you https://www.wattpad.com/story/392928712?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Speechless_poetess

Vesperlian
@Speechless_poetess You're welcome! You did a great job ✨ Looking forward to more of your poems!
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Speechless_poetess
@Speechless_poetess I'm glad you spared your precious time for this! Thank you so much, it means a lott!! ❤️
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Vesperlian
@Speechless_poetess Ahh sorry for the late reply, but I finally got around to reading this—and wow. "Blood, Bruises, and Scars" really hits in a quiet, aching kind of way. There's something raw and haunting in how you’ve described pain, like it’s not just physical but emotional too. I could feel the weight of every word. Some parts felt a little unpolished rhythm-wise, but honestly, that kind of added to the realism—like the thoughts were spilling out mid-breakdown. It’s bold, honest, and I respect that. Keep writing—there’s something really unique in your voice, and I’m excited to read more when I can!
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