Via_adegoke

ZahraShahbazian

Mrs. Charlotte Buchanan, who was a friend of the deceased's family, whispered to her younger sister Elizabeth, who was standing next to her: "I can't believe Emily, who was such a happy and smiling person. How did she suddenly die in the mental hospital and there? Mr.  O'Connor – the deceased's husband – also died this week. It's really terrible."
                At that moment, a carriage had stopped in front of the house, where a man and a woman were talking.
            Mrs. Jane McKenzie – the half-sister of Mr. John O'Connor– said: "Why did you bring me here?"
             A man named Tom Baker said: "To enjoy it."
             "But this way I feel more hatred while I should be happy because I took my revenge."
             "No. You haven't taken your revenge yet. There is still one person left."
             "Alice? She is a child."
             "Yes."
             "But Alice is only eight years old."
             "You were only fourteen when that happened to you."
             "we have to go home and wait a week to rest and let her suffer a little."
             "But you live in Plymouth, which is far from here. Something might happen in this time."
             "In this time, George – the carriage driver – is watching them and will tell us if anything happens."
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Via_adegoke

REVAMPED, REDONE, THE NEW AND IMPROVED CHAPTER ONE. I have been working this chapter like crazy. There was a lot of trial and error. But I'm happy with the improvements. We are doing our best to create something and that's all I can hope for. So have and read and let me know your thoughts. Sending Love to everyone out there!
          
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Via_adegoke

@infernallydamned couldn't do it without you x
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infernallydamned

this will be the best romance book of all the years to come
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Via_adegoke

No chapter 12 yet. :( Over the weekend I spent time reading what I have. I'm not completely happy with it. I don't want to continue this story, if I'm not going to do it justice, or at least to the best of my ability. So I'm starting again...not from scratch but editing and improving what I have. I will keep you updated and an new improved version of chapter one will be posted shortly. Please feel through to let me know what you think. Tips and tricks are so much appreciated.