megs_writes
Thank you so much for putting The Great Hunt in your reading list <3 <3
VianneMax
EliBees
Thanks so much for voting onThe Beast of Stornoway and adding it to your reading list!
VianneMax
I am thoroughly enjoying it. I am a Highlander and part of my family comes from the Hebrides.
I really like the MC - she’s feisty, but we can understand why she might be a little unsure about things, or not have total confidence in herself. I grinned when she poured a drink over that ghastly woman’s head! I look forward to seeing what she will do on the island.
I enjoyed Van’s staff member. Poor man! And no wonder his assistant quit too!
You also make the male MC intriguing. Cold, yes, but good at running things so others prosper and is not afraid to work alongside them. He’s in for a shock when she arrives!
One tiny suggestion - perhaps do a sweep of your sentences to pick up changes in tense. You jump between past and present tense, sometimes in the same sentence.
It’s a privilege to read your work.
Chelsi198
Hey! Hope you enjoy my book “Sweet Serendipity” Thank you for adding it to your reading list! Have an awesome day! ☺️
VianneMax
I am delighted to encounter it and it comes at the perfect time! We are at the start of our summer holidays here. It’s a great cover and an intriguing blurb. I hope you have a great weekend.
VianneMax
Hello!
In celebration of surviving another school year, I will publish the first couple of chapters of Book Two, KAITOA, on Friday.
Freedom!! ;)
VianneMax
Hello! The final part of ANAHERA will appear on Friday. Find out how our stroppy heroine deals with her divine punishment. Unsurprising spoiler: Not Well. ;)
