I am a 22 year old writer. I have two short stories self published on amazon. 
"LOVE IS"    &
 "I'M SANTA CLAUS, BITCH"
I tend to write vividly, often times needing to dial it back to avoid reader headaches. 
My intentions on this site is to test the salability of my story ideas by posting sample chapters. 
Based on feedback I will edit and reroute my scripts. 
That being said, I would love honest, constructive criticism on every little aspect in every story. 
And thank you, I appreciate you taking the time to browse my page ^_^