Victoria_Heart

just started my first story ever XD.....two of my friends who are writers say its good but i would like to hear what people on here think of it.....give me some tips on what i should do or if i should continue please btw its only the prologue and first chapter so go easy on me plz

Victoria_Heart

just started my first story ever XD.....two of my friends who are writers say its good but i would like to hear what people on here think of it.....give me some tips on what i should do or if i should continue please btw its only the prologue and first chapter so go easy on me plz