Victoriarosefly

Hey, guys. I would love for some readers to check out my story "Lost Inbetween", tell me what you think about it. Trynna improve and get some reader engagement goin again

Victoriarosefly

Excerpt for next chapter: Exiled, the Reaper spoke at the other end of the gate. Exiled, for you are no longer permitted to join your family in the Land of the Living.
          
          Curled into the fetal position on the ground, Alec cursed under his breath again as he stared at his dilapidated shack. He often wondered why he still felt emotions as a ghost, and why his world still resembled that of the living. Was the Reaper torturing him? Did the Reaper really sign off on his death sentence? Did he fully transition?
          
          Alec only saw the Reaper once, so he couldn't ask any further questions. But all he knew was that he missed his family, he missed how his baby girl sang his name, and he missed how his wife drank in his sight and how his heart leapt with joy whenever she touched him.
          
          Still, in the ebb and flow of his emotional stupor, he thought about that girl again and how she shared in his pain and spoke to him gently.
          
          I promised her to take away all her pain, he thought to himself. But we both have pain. Damn, so much pain... I felt hers. She showed me. So how can I be there for her when I can't even be there for myself?
          
          Alec's thoughts tumbled over each other as he stayed curled on the ground. No matter how hard he tried, the girl's image danced before him like a flame, reigniting a fire he had longed to be extinguished. He didn't know if it was fate or pure stupidity coupled with loneliness and lust bringing them together.
          
          Whatever the reason, Alec was bound to find out. Only one thought remained: How do I get her back into my world?