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I'm not asking for updates; you don't need that. I also don't believe Wattpad is your primary fanfiction posting site. But, after re-reading your author's note in chapter 26, I have to say: I read with an editing mind. I notice word choice, punctuation, phrasing, writing quirks. But. Your story reads _fantastically._ Sure, most written works made by a single person _could_ be polished slightly, but one with a good heart and worldbuilding doesn't need it. Not unless you plan to publish it for sale. I get your point about hearing the one critique in the crowd. But I can also see you're your own worst critic. I hope that doesn't keep your story from some level of completion, regardless of the timeline to that completion. I don't really know much about Pokémon. Was kept from it as a kid, though my kid brother eats the stuff up with gusto. Your story helped me connect with him as a jumping off point, as well as with another kid who needed to feel his interests were seen. I also just really like the story itself, even if that's partly because I love stuff about shapeshifting and dealing with related challenges. Thought you should know that it's not just Pokémon lovers on the edge of their seats for your story. One of my favorite Wattpad authors is CrystalScherer. My first book of hers was an unedited one. I got hooked and devoured everything she's written. You don't need written perfection for something to be good. Good worldbuilding is, imo, one of the most important things, and it's something you mentioned being happy with. You should be. It's definitely a strength of your story, but not the only one. Sorry this is so long; Imma blame the sleep-deprivation. Hope life is treating you well, and that you're enjoying it with others and a smile :)