YesmeHave

Hey I noticed you were one of the first people to comment on second chance (and even notice it) at first and wanted to hear your thoughts and opinions on how the story is going so far if it's alright with you.

YesmeHave

@Victorygamer123 Honestly yeah I see what you're getting at. And I'm sorry for neglecting that part of the story, more than likely when the U20 match occurs that should be resolved almost completely since I will probably make a whole chapter for 2 goals. The use of his past life memory should also be fixed in the next chapter. I've read other blue lock books and since there isn't a lot of other ones with this AU, it is pretty hard to figure out what to write. Because of your helpful thoughts and opinions I will take longer to plan out and write my chapters, thank you for sharing. 
            
            I would also like you to let me know when the stories picking itself up again so I can know if it's what you were talking about.
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Victorygamer123

@YesmeHave  To be Frank of you. It's not bad and it's not good either. At first part of chapter it was good but after isagi join the Pinklock it fell off. In my perspective you didn't write about the how he doing it to win the match instead you just write who score who that's all which kill the vibe from reading for it. For example The first selection and the second selection challenging Rin. I also feel you didn't use his past life memory to his fullest. Try reading other's Bluelock book, you will understand what I meant for it.
            That's all from my opinion.
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