If you want me to do a rewrite of my story say so. If you like it say so. If you dont say so. If you do like it spread the word. If you think I skipped the part there is no love at first site then reread. I'm new to writing, dont make me hate any of you please. I may add detail I may take it down and re write but that depends on how many want me to and when I get it back from my editor. I was just trying to get it up before I backed out of publishing it. If I make it long enough I'll turn it into an actual book with different character names and magic types so it's not copyright. If you have anything you want to say say it.
