butterflyindia
Hello sweetie, thanks for giving my story "The villain's Rise" a try , i hope you liked it and continue to read. Love ❤️
Vinie560
@butterflyindi it is good , but author San, try to make your reader anticipate for what will happen . Their heartbeat should rise with each chapter
butterflyindia
@Vinie560 thank you for your suggestions, let me tell you , I'm waiting for someone who tells me , which mistakes I have made in the Story, because deep inside I always feel that my story is really good or is it just a myth? So it's my request can you please tell me it's really good or I need to improve?
