aaronstories

Thanks for checking out my story and commenting your suggestion. Hope you liked it❤️

aaronstories

@aaronstories Aww, thank you so much ✨ I’m really happy you’re enjoying the story.
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Vinie560

@aaronstories , yes it is good author san  , very good , so ganbatte author san for your  writing
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butterflyindia

Hello sweetie, thanks for giving my story "The villain's Rise" a try , i hope you liked it and continue to read. Love ❤️

butterflyindia

@Vinie560 okay thankyou dear ❤️
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Vinie560

@butterflyindi it is good , but author San,  try to make your reader anticipate for what will happen . Their heartbeat should rise with each chapter
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butterflyindia

@Vinie560 thank you for your suggestions, let me tell you , I'm waiting for someone who tells me , which mistakes I have made in the Story, because deep inside I always feel that my story is really good or is it just a myth? So it's my request can you please tell me it's really good or I need to improve?
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