Atlanticsx
I AM IN LOVE! I could scream, this storry is soo good. You are so talented. Please never stop writing.
VintageRosez
VintageRosez
Hey guys!
Working on a remastered version of unbounded with a much better plot and ending. I will be posting it as a different story so no need to worry if you like the original better. In the meantime please consider reading my original dark romance story Gifted!
VintageRosez
Hey guys!
I have plans to possibly re-write UNBOUNDED focusing more on plot, character development and maybe an alternative ending. Would you guys be interested in this or would you prefer I focus on a new story?
If you are interested in me re-writing UNBOUNDED, what are some things you would like to see more of, less of, what you liked, what you didn't?
Please keep criticism respectful
Thanks!
nancnef
Totally agree! ^^^
The story itself is perfect as is. The ending to me, however, felt incomplete. Trust me- the entire storyline is FLAWLESS and nothing needs to change, but after Rey left to fight her internal struggle alone/finding the meaning of her true self, and then restarting the following chapter a year after her leave, felt all too “missing.” Not so much confusing, but a gap of the “why,” “how” on Rey’s POV. The way you illustrated Kylo’s POV, grief, agony, suffering was all beautifully written (which I wouldn’t change at all!), but I felt there could have been more. What that “more” is I don’t quite know, and for that I am grateful I don’t have the burden of possibly rewriting/editing this beautiful novel. Regardless of what you choose, I HUGELY appreciate you, your time, and this story from the bottom of my heart.
As a mom of 3 and wife to a doctor who is always gone, life can get pretty mundane and in some ways make you reach a point of insanity if you don’t have a hobby you truly enjoy. Reading your novels have been a pure joy and escape. So, again- thank you.
AnnaHarbour
Heyyyyy so Unbounded is literally one of my fav reylo fan fics and it is amazing!!! I think the ending was just a bit confusing, for me anyway, so if ur thinking of re-write I would say only the ending, the rest is perfectttt, but like maybe an alt ending? Love the story so much so I am excited if u do decide on it.
AnnaHarbour
Hey girl! Just wonder when the next chapter will be out. Xxxx
VintageRosez
@AnnaHarbour Hey! Thanks for your interest in the story. I'm in the process of editing the chapter and will hopefully get it posted in the next few weeks!
VintageRosez
I hope everyone is doing well! I will be posting a new chapter sometime next week so look out for that! I appreciate everyone who is still following this story and patiently waiting for an update. Thanks again ♡
nancnef
Missing you and your work! Can’t wait for an update
nancnef
Girl, as long as you’re happy with it that’s all that matterS :) it’s your “baby,” so you do what you gotta do. Supporting you from afar! :)
VintageRosez
@nancnef Thank you! I have literally wrote this chapter so many times and each time I've scrapped it which is why is taking me forever :/ hopefully I will get this chapter out and be 100% happy with it!
AnnaHarbour
Heyy I'm in love with your book and I'm so excited for the next chapter!
VintageRosez
Still working on the chapter! Turns out I still need additional time :))))))) I'm amimg for a post by the end of the week!
VintageRosez
Working on THE chapter.........Get ready for some Reylo next week!
Note: Bring tissues.
nancnef
Whats THE chapter?!?! I’m so nervous!!! Does this mean Unbounded will come to an end???
Love your writing so much :)
VintageRosez
Ready for some more Reylo? Posting a new chapter tomorrow.
nancnef
Yesss! YESSS! Girl, this quarantine has had me on the brink of madness, so I could totally use a new chapter right about now! Thank you!!!