TheNewGuy2
I am taking down the latest chapter to rework it, and hopefully make it better.
I will delete the comments you made on the original launch so no one gets confused.
VioletGaming69
@TheNewGuy2 Son, you have won half the battle. What you said in your third section is half the battle
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TheNewGuy2
@VioletGaming69 I was doing it for me. It's out now, and I changed it to be a bit of a better filler chapter. I just looked back at it and thought that it was pretty out of place, only further confirmed by your critiques. Thanks, by the way! Good writers come from learning from mistakes, not endless praise with no criticism.
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VioletGaming69
@TheNewGuy2 What? Why? Just because it wasn't much doesn't mean I was telling you to take it down.
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