Virgo28th
"Hello! I'd like to share an excerpt from my action novel. This is a work-in-progress, and I'd love to hear your thoughts on character development and pacing. Please keep in mind that this is a rough draft, and I'm open to any constructive feedback."
Feel free to share your work, and I'll do my best to provide helpful feedback!
https://www.wattpad.com/story/400721604