Parts X, XI, and XII are out! I'm having my teacher read what I've got, so hopefully I'll be given ideas on improving the story! Hope you all are enjoying so far. This is a serious labor from me, and I'd love for it to actually get feedback.
also part VI because i want to get to the good part for y'all.
i'm realizing how many mistakes i've made writing this, now that i've started publishing. i've also been reading an instructional piece on making stories and it's showed me my flaws. oh well! always time to improve!
What up I’ve been up since 3:30 am and am really tired
Horse shows are crazy work y’all, especially when yours is throwing a fit
So part IV is somewhat boring at first, now that I’m rereading it. Ehhh sorryyyyy
So as you can see, my page has been... 'updated.' Girl of the Mind is now my main focus until I get all the segments out. That will happen by February, as I need to meet my school deadlines heheh
Anyway, any feedback would be loved! Thank you for reading!