ViridianSquish

HEYO I JUST UPDATED BY ADDING LIKE 5 SEGMENTS! THINGS GET DRAMATIC NOW BOIIIIIIII
          	I hope you enjoy it! I'd love any feedback that's constructive!

ViridianSquish

Parts X, XI, and XII are out! I'm having my teacher read what I've got, so hopefully I'll be given ideas on improving the story! Hope you all are enjoying so far. This is a serious labor from me, and I'd love for it to actually get feedback.

ViridianSquish

also part VI because i want to get to the good part for y'all.
          i'm realizing how many mistakes i've made writing this, now that i've started publishing. i've also been reading an instructional piece on making stories and it's showed me my flaws. oh well! always time to improve!

ViridianSquish

So as you can see, my page has been... 'updated.' Girl of the Mind is now my main focus until I get all the segments out. That will happen by February, as I need to meet my school deadlines heheh
          Anyway, any feedback would be loved! Thank you for reading!

ViridianSquish

@GallopingDreams 
          You know I'm perfectly okay with that tbh XD I was already aware anyway but thank you~
          Hellooooooo I thought it was you

ViridianSquish

hAAAHAHAHHAHAH ITS OKAYyyYYYYyYY
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GallopingDreams

@ViriTheWolf hah yea c: 
            
            I MAY BE OBSESSED WITH SAID HOMOSEXUAL SHIPS
            sORrY
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