@50ShadesofFukedup I'm sorry if my statements are contradictory but by nature I do often change my mind many times before settling with an option that suits. I am done with incestuous and romantic fiction based on real people. I am not done with this story but found I needed to check my morals (I merely seek to rewrite and give new life to it). I'm very happy that you believe it to have great potential, and I thank you for that. I do not seek approval in my actions, I merely try to do what I think is best. I'm sorry if this all sounds really formal and that but I was reading poetry and yea... Thanks for all the great feedback you've given me through this fics' journey.