Vish4SSAD

I've unpublished CoF. I was going through it and parts of it make me cringe. I'm going to be focussing on fanfic for now and I'll basically be experimenting with writing styles. Fanfic is going to be my playground for now. After I've managed to become...better(?) at writing, I'll start working on it. But for now it's going in the archives.
          	
          	Ciao.
          	
          	Also, my hands are finally better. So no more STT. Yay?

RsyShiro

@Vish4SSAD will you publish it again? Or will it stay in the pits of drafts indefinitely?
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Vish4SSAD

I've unpublished CoF. I was going through it and parts of it make me cringe. I'm going to be focussing on fanfic for now and I'll basically be experimenting with writing styles. Fanfic is going to be my playground for now. After I've managed to become...better(?) at writing, I'll start working on it. But for now it's going in the archives.
          
          Ciao.
          
          Also, my hands are finally better. So no more STT. Yay?

RsyShiro

@Vish4SSAD will you publish it again? Or will it stay in the pits of drafts indefinitely?
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Vish4SSAD

So I've managed to get a (somewhat) stable schedule. I'm trying to get an upload once every three days. Eventually I want to shorten it to two and then one but baby steps are the first steps. 
          
          Anyway wanted to say I haven't forgotten about Reset. I'm writing a chapter and fleshing out the lore for it. So I'll publish a new chapter tomorrow for Reset. CoT will have to wait though. 
          
          Ciao. 

Vish4SSAD

It is now, proven without a doubt that the Gods hate me and try to kill me on a regular basis.
          
          Right when I started my writing, the electricity went out (again) and I fell down the stairs (again). This time I wasn’t lucky enough to leave with only a concussion and managed to get myself two fractures for the price of one! A truly amazing deal.
          
          Anyway, I’m currently using the tool which is humanity’s greatest boon and bane, speech-to-text.
          
          Hopefully, provided STT doesn’t try to screw me over as well, you should look out for updates on CoT and Reset.
          
          Ciao.

RsyShiro

@Vish4SSAD you've angered the gods and they truly want you to fall (quite literally)
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Vish4SSAD

Ladies and Gentlemen, 
          It's confirmed. Which ever higher entity/deity/God with a capital G controls my life has decided to screw with me. 
          
          Right after posting a chapter and getting ready for quick updates I...fell down the stairs. And I earned a concussion for my efforts. My recently vanquished headache decided to join the concussion and left someone who formerly slept only for 6 hours in a day, lying in bed 14hrs/day.
          
          Things are getting better, i.e I can open up the phone without feeling like somebody is trying to drill through my skull and try to access the void that is my brain, so I should be back within 4 days. 
          
          Thank you for understanding or at least earning a laugh at my expense. 
          
          See you all soon (hopefully, provided the Big Guy is feeling good). Ciao

RsyShiro

@Vish4SSAD my golly god REALLY doesn't want you to write the story. Maybe he was the one who experimented on the Numbered People...
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Vish4SSAD

My headaches mostly cleared up so I’m back on the grind. I’ll be releasing four chapters of CoF in four days so there’s that. In other news, I’ve finally decided to make a BNHA fanfic. You can check it out of it tickles your...pickle? I really need to know the original phrases and not just the meme formats. 
          
          Anyways, just an update. Enjoy.
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          (I still don’t know I’m supposed to write at the end.)

RsyShiro

@Vish4SSAD oh my god hes back
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Vish4SSAD

Isn't life fun... 
          
          Sorry for the total drop. I've been having general weakness and one hell of a headache. It's slowly getting better, so I should be able to post chapters soon, provided the Electricity Board doesn't decide to mess with me once again. 
          
          Again, sorry for the one week gap in between. See you soon!(?) 

RsyShiro

@Vish4SSAD I've been wodering where youve been. Looking forward to future chapters!
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Vish4SSAD

Sometimes I wonder whether the universe just wants to see how long it can mess with me before I go insane. Yesterday I finally got ready to write when there was a false fire alarm. Today the electricity went out just as I finished my chores...and I didn't have my laptop charged. 
          
          Like I said...f u n. 
          
          Anyway if the universe decides to stop trying to metaphorically screw me, a chapter should be up tomorrow. 
          
          Apologies for the delay. 

Vish4SSAD

@RsyShiro .... 
            I hate this and love this. 
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RsyShiro

@Vish4SSAD i guess you can say it was a..... convergence of fate
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RsyShiro

A fine job indeed describing the backstory of Altair. From what we know, we can assume that Altair is a person driven by rage and guilt. The backstory supports this, and does a very nice job of setting up for that kind of character plot. The only question I have for this chapter is who is Altair? I assume that he would be introduced later on, or he is in fact number one. 
          
          And the little foreshadowing at the end, combined with the story's description, hints at that the people who turn into the 13 Order are no longer themselves, but instead a different entity, that simply remember their "past" life. This is assuming Altair is one of the Orders however. To wrap up, the backstory was satisfactory, and the fight scene was enough for me to become more hype for future fights. My compliments to the chef.