Vivaan_Writes

If I Had Jumped That Night, This Story Would've Ended, Before It Even Began—  
          	 NEW STORY ALERT!! 
          	Prologue + Chapter 1 Is Out Now!! 
          	Read It Now, Share Your Thoughts And Don't Forget To Hit The Star Button For more! ⭐❤️
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/398091220

MadihaImran1

Hey,
          
          I hope you’re having a cozy day, filled with books that feel like old friends.
          
          I’m really sorry to slide into your space like this—I just came across your profile and noticed you enjoy emotional, character-driven stories. My friend has recently started sharing a story that’s really close to her heart, and I thought you might love it too.
          
          It’s called In the Wake of Us.
          
          She’s never known love.
          He’s still haunted by it.
          Neither of them saw the storm coming.
          
          Maira believes she’s not meant to be loved.
          Arham once was—and it broke him.
          Now they’re bound by a marriage neither wanted, caught in a silence thick with pain and unspoken truths.
          
          It’s a slow-burn, emotional read about grief, love, and the quiet ways people find their way back to themselves—and to each other. Not the kind of love that fixes everything… but the kind that changes you.
          
          If that sounds like something you’d enjoy, it would mean a lot if you gave it a chance. My friend would be truly grateful for your support!
          
          And if you ever feel like sharing your thoughts, she would love to hear them—only if you’re comfortable, of course.
          
          Thank you so much for your time. It means more than you know.
          
          Link:https://www.wattpad.com/story/391334086?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=_Softlylostinstories

BunnyTigerTale

Hey you asked for my suggestion & here I am...
          
          I would say first of all make the prologue short and mostly about the story only.Introduce your characters properly like any pic which describes them (pinterest can help) give a brief intro of their nature without spoiling the plot.
          
          Try not to have too many characters & mainly focus on the  main character and try to write their thoughts and emotions properly. a message for your readers that you drop after your  chapters, make it short. Hope your story writing improves more and you become famous soon, Vivaan♡⁠˖
          
          P.S – if you like my story, why did you not give any votes?? Puchhta hai bharat !

BunnyTigerTale

I have only read 'found you in the fall' and given my thoughts according to that.
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writercute77

Hi!! I just posted part 4 if my story "The perfect gift" in my short stories book!! I'd love for you to check it out!!!! Plz check the author's note on it too thanks!!!! :) ❤️❤️❤️❤️

astrasbooks

@writercute77 heyy i was wondering if you wanted to do r4r, c4c and v4v for my book The Slow Fall -
            https://www.wattpad.com/story/394635621-the-slow-fall
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salalalamander109

Hi author! Thank you so much for complimenting my story!
          And about yours, I read it and you are off to a great start! The plot is very interesting!
          Honestly one main suggestion from me is to PLEASE fix your grammar!!
          - it makes your story much more appealing to readers
          - its makes it EASIER for you to understand yourself.
          - here are some ways to improve your grammar: remove unnecessary capitilization, fix random change in tenses, and make your sentences more fluid and easily able to read.
          I understand if english is not your first language. If you have heard of Chatgpt or any other AI tools, feel free to copy and paste your draft into the chat box and ask chagpt to fix capitilzation errors and grammar mistakes.
          Otherwise, i think all the other people pointed out other helpful suggestions. Good luck with your story!! Hope this was helpful!

mikaren05

I read ur story and I don't see why you need my help, author. Your story is already this good. You have a lot of potential and you have a lot of reads and friends to support you already. But if you really are in need of tips then..
          1. Writing a lot of drafts. Don't let the readers reach you. If they are reading your chapter 2, you should already be finished drafting your chapter 10.
          2. With a lot of drafts written you are free to post a chapter whenever you want. So take it to your advantage and post them in a matter of 2-3 days. 
          3. This way you will reach the top of your hashtags fast enough and a lot of people will check your story out (without R4R) (My story was never meant for readers until my bff enforced me into posting them. It is a boring story but if you liked it, Kudos dude)
          4. Your idea is good so when you write, you should experiment with words. Details are v important. For reference you should try stories from kakashi sensei in my reading list. She has a lot of intellect and a way of writing (i love her). You can be creative with words. If you don't know big words, you should search the g dictionary.
          (I'm not very social so I like that I could interact with someone from the community. Also why do you use Cap so much?)