VivianRosalinder

Part 7 o My Mom The Intergalactic Terrorist is out! Go check it out! 

pranjaliaditi

Your story MY MOM AN INTERGALACTIC TERRORIST is such a beautiful piece of art! I literally had tears laughing at the first chapter. 
          
          Just a suggestion though. Break the paragraphs by putting more lines between them. 
          
          Keep Smiling! 

pranjaliaditi

You're welcome :)
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VivianRosalinder

Thank you! I’m so glad you liked it and I’ll try to fix the issue with the paragraphs. Thank you again! 
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