Vivian_Dream13

The world is depleting under the sight of Raine. She is defenseless against the horrors thriving in her memories so can you all spark directions for her so she can escape the Hallows?

themicheal03

Hey! I noticed you reacted to Dream, and I just wanted to say thank you — that truly means a lot.
          If you’re enjoying the story so far, I’d love for you to continue through all 14 chapters of Volume 1 and let me know what you think — honestly, good or bad. I really value real feedback from readers who are actually experiencing the journey.
          Each volume builds on the last, so if you find yourself invested, Volumes 2–5 continue that growth in deeper ways. No pressure at all — just wanted to invite you to experience it fully.
          Thank you again for the support

themicheal03

@themicheal03 Thank you so much for taking the time to actually read and reflect — that really means a lot to me. Dream’s backstory and relationships are the foundation of everything that follows, so I’m glad those elements came through clearly. I truly appreciate your thoughtful feedback, and I hope you enjoy where her journey leads as it continues to unfold.
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Vivian_Dream13

@themicheal03  I have read your 2 chapters both 1st and 2nd, and you are going in right direction. Now, this is because you have written a compelling backstory for your protagonist Dream, clearly showed the struggle and tragedy behind her story. I will read more where it will go . For right now, I will for a starting of story it's great her relationship with her friend in second chapter you rote so effective you are creating a good protagonist keep developing her character. Right now i can say this.
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