I think you have potential, you can write good and long chapters. You have original idea. Juat don't use too many cliche scene, that everyone use. Make the story yours, put your sign in it, put your idea, i know it's difficul. I said the bad things because they are the one you need to focus. Focus on: not too fast, slowly develop taekook realtionship, show how they got closer, not too many fast forward. Good luck! And don't worry about the views, they will come with time!