VonLeporace

Hello, I would like to leave some updates about which of my fics had some changes after I reviewed them.
          	
          	Elden Monarch: Minor and major changes on some chapters, mainly chapters 4, 8, 9, 16, 17, and 18. I corrected lore mistakes, adjusted power scaling, and changed dialogues and some scenes. I also corrected the grammar of all the chapters.
          	*New chapter in progress.
          	
          	Drakengard Anomaly: The Tale of an Angel and an Intoner: I did not change much stuff but corrected the grammar, lore mistakes, and added images and music.
          	
          	Nier Replicant: Shades of the Past: Minor changes on the chapters, making them shorter. I also corrected the grammar and added images and music.
          	
          	Nier Automata: Journeys in the 12th Millenium: Minor changes and shorter chapters, fixed continuity erros, corrected grammar, and added images and music.
          	
          	Drakengard: Demonic Flower: Almost no important changes but really shortened chapters with corrected grammar. I am in the process of adding images and music, chapters 1 to 3 right now.
          	
          	Rebirth of a Dinasty, The Orkalorian, and Fear, Hunger and Cosmic Horros will have some correcting and changes in the future.

Aeonshinta

@VonLeporace 
          	  what next story are you gonna update?
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VonLeporace

@ Aeonshinta  I will update Elden Monarch next. But it is taking some time since it is a big chapter.
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ato_telar5

I think I will read the story again. I always enjoy when I read. I never get bored.
          	  
          	  (Elden Monarch)
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VonLeporace

Hello, I would like to leave some updates about which of my fics had some changes after I reviewed them.
          
          Elden Monarch: Minor and major changes on some chapters, mainly chapters 4, 8, 9, 16, 17, and 18. I corrected lore mistakes, adjusted power scaling, and changed dialogues and some scenes. I also corrected the grammar of all the chapters.
          *New chapter in progress.
          
          Drakengard Anomaly: The Tale of an Angel and an Intoner: I did not change much stuff but corrected the grammar, lore mistakes, and added images and music.
          
          Nier Replicant: Shades of the Past: Minor changes on the chapters, making them shorter. I also corrected the grammar and added images and music.
          
          Nier Automata: Journeys in the 12th Millenium: Minor changes and shorter chapters, fixed continuity erros, corrected grammar, and added images and music.
          
          Drakengard: Demonic Flower: Almost no important changes but really shortened chapters with corrected grammar. I am in the process of adding images and music, chapters 1 to 3 right now.
          
          Rebirth of a Dinasty, The Orkalorian, and Fear, Hunger and Cosmic Horros will have some correcting and changes in the future.

Aeonshinta

@VonLeporace 
            what next story are you gonna update?
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VonLeporace

@ Aeonshinta  I will update Elden Monarch next. But it is taking some time since it is a big chapter.
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ato_telar5

I think I will read the story again. I always enjoy when I read. I never get bored.
            
            (Elden Monarch)
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scrollsofthephoenix

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VonLeporace

@scrollsofthephoenix Olá, bom dia! Como vai você? Eu agradeço o convite, mas já estou em um grupo de leitura.
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Alienguy13

Have any you experienced looking at another person's reading list and seeing a completely different list than shown?

VonLeporace

@Alienguy13 Oh, I never had this problem.
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Alienguy13

@VonLeporace because on the mobile app it'll randomly have another person's reading list show a completely different list than shown. Sometimes it'll show what's shown, sometimes not. Like for yours 4 of your reading lists show something completely different.
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VonLeporace

@Alienguy13 I don't think I've ever had this problem, why?
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MrChillz

Is your Fear & Hunger story still a reader insert, or is it an OC story now? I am very confused by the title change.

VonLeporace

@MrChillz You are welcome!
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MrChillz

@VonLeporace Thank you for the clarification. Much appreciated.
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VonLeporace

@MrChillz I think this explain very well what I mean with OC SI:
            
            SI OC is a subgenre of self insert fanfiction whose name stands for self insert original character. Fics in this genre feature self inserts who've been reincarnated into a body native to their new universe, which they experienced as some form of fiction in their previous life.
            
            The use of original character in the genre name can refer to the body the SI has been inserted into, but often instead refers to the inserts themselves, who in many cases are only loosely based on the author and sometimes aren't based on the author at all. The SI OC's new body may be that of a major canon character, a minor or background character, or a completely new original character.
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bianca456maadorch

Olha, não é querendo ser chata ou coisa do tipo no seu mural. Mas eu queria te apresentar o projeto Critics Blossom, um projeto de troca de leitura ente escritores com direito a resenha!
          O projeto Critics Blossom é um projeto com o intuito de melhorar seu senso crítico e sua percepção narrativa. Além que, a leitura de obras é semanal, ou seja, você não vai ter que ler uma obra por dia e provavelmente sair do projeto incontáveis vezes, até você finalmente desistir e entender que não era pra ser assim (sim, foi especifico demais, eu sei, mas enfim). Nisso, ajudaremos você e a sua obra a crescer com críticas votos e comentários durante a sua semana, além de um programa de leitura de obras famosas para analisá-las e compreender a formação de sua narrativas.
          
          Tem interesse para entrar? Aqui o livro de regras:  https://www.wattpad.com/story/375398708-critics-blossom

bianca456maadorch

 @VonLeporace  ahh certo, obrigado por responder!
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VonLeporace

@bianca456maadorch Olá, boa tarde! Tudo bem? Agradeço o convite, mas já faço parte de um grupo de leitura.
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VonLeporace

Seguindo as sugestões dadas por alguns leitores, alterei o emblema da Bandeira do Waaagh! de Gorlonik de preto para branco, pois o antigo se misturava com a cor de fundo, também adicionei a bandeira alterada ao capítulo das bandeiras.
          
          Following the suggestions given by some readers , I changed the emblem of the Waaagh! Banner of Gorlonik from black to white, as the old one blended in with the background color, I also added the changed baner to the banners chapter.