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Very much so thanks. I read over my new chapter that I've written and WOW! I can't believe how much I repeat a word such as; he said or she said. Thank you very much.

@Raquel_W Well, I would start reading over the chapters to see if there are any grammar mistakes. If there is a world I use too much, I replace the word with another one so I don't seem boring. Then, I add more adverbs or adjectives if I can just to finish it off. Hope my advice helps! 

Thx. I know it's not extremely good so any advice you can give me would be very helpful.

@Raquel_W Thank you! I already read the first two chapters but so far, I think it's great. With a little fixing, it would be even better. 

Aloha. Would you read my book, The Obstreperous, please. It's very important to me if you could. Only on so many people I say this but, I really like your writing. It's almost professional writing. Therefore I would like your advice.

Hola me friend