girl I think this fanfic is the best I’ve ever read fr. the little pieces of personality that peak through each chapter is really what deepens the story of ur characters and makes reading this so worthwhile, even if it’s just individual notes; the fluff is also perfectly detailed and u put it into each chapter the perfect amount of times throughout the book — the description of each event is also real and life-like, but it’s not boring same-old stuff, which is what makes ur writing so different to other shittakes I’ve read. I so hate reading stories with little to no detail, no personalisation, or just same-old overused plot, and you’ve fr shown ur creativity in writing the perfect amount of mischief, fantasy, detail to characterisation and suggesting how characters would canonically react to things (not some bs w no connection to each character), and real bonding that i think everyone has been looking for in fanfics; I’m obsessed, and I think you’d do amazingly if you go on to write proper books for a living — I’d read all of them frrrr GIRL COME BACK I NEED MORE UPDATES