Hey! I'm really enjoying reading "The 8th Weasley", but there are some errors that I've noticed, fundamentals-wise. I would absolutely be willing to work with you to help smooth out some of the rougher patches, if you'd like to take me on as an editor. No pressure, of course; it's a wonderful story thus far, and I'm sure it will only get better, the grammar and punctuation things just take away from it a bit. Happy writing!
-Aless