WPReviews

@State-of-the-ART - Hmm... No, I wouldn't say it was hard to understand. But I guess I'd say it was a little difficult to pick out what the main conflict was going to be.  I didn't get a sense of "Okay - I totally get who this girl is, I relate to her - and I know what she wants, and what's standing in her way, and what she's going to have to give up to get it" ... if that makes sense in a super run-on sentence type of way? :]
          	
          	In case it didn't, I think your story did make sense, but could have used a tiny bit more clarity when it came to what the major conflict was going to be.

marina-vega

Hello! I know what your thinking, your here on Wattpad, reading this note, thinking out of all the story requests I have on here, this story How To Be A Horrible Person is the one I need to review, lol jk but I do really hope you will check out my story, I would love to hear your honest  opinion, it's in the non fiction category, How To Be A Horrible Person is actually my memoir, it is written in a story like way though so I get questions all the time if it's fiction or not, growing up as a teenager I had a lot of issues with my mom being addicted to prescription pills, my first boyfriend cheated on me with my best friend and my other love interest ended up being gay, it's a funny, sad, serious look at being a teenager and learning how to deal with all the BS, I hope you give it a look, I hope you like it 
          -Marina Vega

celestjal

Hey, I was wondering if you could review my story? But a) it's not finished yet, and b) it's an all-dialogue story. I decided to write it to work on my conversations/dynamics between people, and I think it's been helpful so far, but I'd like someone else's opinion. It's called Prank Call, so if you have time, could you please check it out? Thanks :)

sheabutterny

Hey there! I was wondering if you could review my book Going Rouge? It's teen fiction and has about 14 chapters up currently. Feel free to read as much of it as you want. Also if you're willing to take a look at my other book, Moon Girl, while you're at it, that would be great. It only has one chapter so far. Thanks so much!

lafleurdeverite

As soon as you get through the 385839194097976222838945 other Wattpaders wanting you to read their story, it would be much appreciated of you took a look at mine!
          It's entitled Taken, and is about a girl who gets taken (hence the title [: ) back to her home planet to restore peace. And if you couldn't tell already, it's sci-fi. Thanks! :)

Angel_Eyes24

Alrighty-I see your list of request is kinda long hehe eh....so I doubt you'll get to my anytime soon. So whenever you have time, mind checking out my story "the demon's host" it's basically about what the title says..... some other stuff (not much of a summary person) soooo yeah! 
          
          Pleases and thank yous from moi!!!

MercyRose

Hi,  I would really appreciate it you would read a little of my story and review it please.  Any commentary would be grateful.
          
          Thanks,
          Tara
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/1013219-learning-to-love-again
          
          Raven thought she had everything in life that she ever needed including love, friends and happiness.  In the blink of an eye a tragic accident can take everything away.  Can Raven ever find her heart again?

JamesDSwinney

I think that it's noble of you, making an account solely for reviewing. If more people would do this, then the "Share your story club" wouldn't have 50,000,000 discussions in it. So here we go. 
          Would you like to review my fantasy story, A Sacrifice for Varkanah? Here's the summary:
          
          Terrilor has been at peace for ages. Wealth has been acquired and lost. Friendships have been made and broken. Despite all these things though, order, peace, and prosperity has reigned eternally. But this seemingly endless peace is shaken to its very core when a mysterious cult arises from the very earth. Varkanah needs blood. Only the sacrifices of countless people will sate his enormous blood-lust. Saeran Randsly, an average man living in Rosehollow Village, seeks revenge when the cult mercilessly slaughters his family, especially his uncle William.
          
          Why would this cult choose to sacrifice William? Will Saeran get his revenge? Will Terrilor be lost under the dominion of Varkanah? Find out in "A Sacrifice for Varkanah" 
          
          So, yeah. It's been getting some pretty good comments from some pretty amazing authors on here (such as TheOrangutan, DeathRage, and FauxPunker, among others). If you'd review, even only the first couple of chapters (5-10/23) I'd be appreciative. Thanks!