WPReviews

@State-of-the-ART - Hmm... No, I wouldn't say it was hard to understand. But I guess I'd say it was a little difficult to pick out what the main conflict was going to be.  I didn't get a sense of "Okay - I totally get who this girl is, I relate to her - and I know what she wants, and what's standing in her way, and what she's going to have to give up to get it" ... if that makes sense in a super run-on sentence type of way? :]
          	
          	In case it didn't, I think your story did make sense, but could have used a tiny bit more clarity when it came to what the major conflict was going to be.

marina-vega

Hello! I know what your thinking, your here on Wattpad, reading this note, thinking out of all the story requests I have on here, this story How To Be A Horrible Person is the one I need to review, lol jk but I do really hope you will check out my story, I would love to hear your honest  opinion, it's in the non fiction category, How To Be A Horrible Person is actually my memoir, it is written in a story like way though so I get questions all the time if it's fiction or not, growing up as a teenager I had a lot of issues with my mom being addicted to prescription pills, my first boyfriend cheated on me with my best friend and my other love interest ended up being gay, it's a funny, sad, serious look at being a teenager and learning how to deal with all the BS, I hope you give it a look, I hope you like it 
          -Marina Vega

celestjal

Hey, I was wondering if you could review my story? But a) it's not finished yet, and b) it's an all-dialogue story. I decided to write it to work on my conversations/dynamics between people, and I think it's been helpful so far, but I'd like someone else's opinion. It's called Prank Call, so if you have time, could you please check it out? Thanks :)

sheabutterny

Hey there! I was wondering if you could review my book Going Rouge? It's teen fiction and has about 14 chapters up currently. Feel free to read as much of it as you want. Also if you're willing to take a look at my other book, Moon Girl, while you're at it, that would be great. It only has one chapter so far. Thanks so much!

CrazyChic93

Hi there!
          I was just wondering if there was any way that you could review my story "Why us?"
          It's a Percy Jackson fanfic and it's not finished yet, but if you could just give me some feedback on what i've done so far that would be much appreciated. Thanks xD

lafleurdeverite

As soon as you get through the 385839194097976222838945 other Wattpaders wanting you to read their story, it would be much appreciated of you took a look at mine!
          It's entitled Taken, and is about a girl who gets taken (hence the title [: ) back to her home planet to restore peace. And if you couldn't tell already, it's sci-fi. Thanks! :)

Angel_Eyes24

Alrighty-I see your list of request is kinda long hehe eh....so I doubt you'll get to my anytime soon. So whenever you have time, mind checking out my story "the demon's host" it's basically about what the title says..... some other stuff (not much of a summary person) soooo yeah! 
          
          Pleases and thank yous from moi!!!

MercyRose

Hi,  I would really appreciate it you would read a little of my story and review it please.  Any commentary would be grateful.
          
          Thanks,
          Tara
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/1013219-learning-to-love-again
          
          Raven thought she had everything in life that she ever needed including love, friends and happiness.  In the blink of an eye a tragic accident can take everything away.  Can Raven ever find her heart again?