GunnerGang
Are you updating Garden of stories soon
Waffurupason
AlexBrant18
Your book, Sleepwalker, can I write a book based off your AU? It’s fine if I can’t, I know some people have their own personal AUs.
Waffurupason
I just finished it, and I have to say that you wrote it way better than mine
But all in all, it's pretty good
otakufancyfanstudent
Are you ok? And will you continue those stories of yours. They are very good and leave one wanting to know more.
Waffurupason
@otakufancyfanstudent Thanks, hoping you did well to. I just miss the virtual learning. -_-
otakufancyfanstudent
Ok that's cool. Glad you made it throw the pandemic ok. That was crazy last year.
Waffurupason
@otakufancyfanstudent I'm fine, just took a break cause of school. And I'm not sure when but I'll be updating soon, so no worries.
beannnnnnne
are you bored of wattpad or you just left wattpad
howlhear
"where r u now?"
LazyTaffy
A really love your books! It's very unique and nice. Keep up the good work! ^^
NightmareAvery
Can you continue 'Garden Of Stories'?
Waffurupason
Happy Thanksgiving!
Claryamelody
Thanks for being honest!! Also, The thing with capital letters is a personal preference.
As you said, The story was a bit rushed, So I didn't really have any time to actually think. In most times, I had to leave my phone to do other stuff and left it there, Incomplete.
I never really actually though about thinking outside of the box, Since I mostly just try to show you what's going on inside my mind.
Thank you for the tips, And I wish the best of luck to you and your stories!!
Waffurupason
@Claryamelody I'm glad to know you have such wonderful sounding friends, really! Thank you for the compliment and for pleasant conversation!
Claryamelody
@Waffurupason To be exactly honest and Frank with you, I'm not saying this from my thoughts, I'm actually speaking from lots of experiences. A few of them I don't remember, But there are a few that I do. I was hurt they would lie to me like that, And now that I have friends who are honest with me and know you, Who is an honest person from what I can tell, I'm relieved.
SheilaEvergarden12
Great story!! I really like garden of stories!
If you could, Please check out my story!
To find it, You know what you have to do and give me some tips on how to improve in your aspect!!(if you're comfortable, That is.)
Also, I'm sorry if it is very short, I spend my time reading other stories, Watching youtube, Drawing or doing other stuff in particular, So it always runs from my mind.
Also, Be as honest as you can about how good or bad my story was, I want an honest response so I could improve myself.
I also forgot to mention that I liked the fact you have some focus unto fell's POV and interactions with Error the sweety boo, Mother, Father and cinnabun.
I honestly needed a change of pace since most Forced God Of Destruction Error Sans were kind of similar.
Kind of positive you'll get tired of this comment fast or that you won't even read it, But please continue with "garden of stories"!! I promise you on the name my parents gave me on my birth that my thoughts on this story are all positive!
I really enjoyed it!
I'm actually glad you decided to share some of your imagination with us, Since I needed a break from similar Fgod stories, So thank you very much for publishing this book!
Also, If you want to go to my library, Library is super stuffed, So you don't want to go in there.
If you decide to go, Don't write I didn't warn ya, Buddy ol' pal.
Anyways, Great to know you, And I hope you consider continuing this book and make it long as well!!
Great day/Noon/Afternoon/Evening/Night/Dawn!
Waffurupason
@SheilaEvergarden12 Hello and thank you for the compliments! The read your story "Kitty Love" to your request and overall thought it was 6/10 material. I'm not trying to be seen as rude but rather more honest. The plot was at best, average, compared to other Fgod stories. I didn't see much problem with your writing style but the chapter seem rushed. I want to know how long it took you to write it, if you don't mind. Also, I couldn't help but notice how you start with capital letters after every comma, in both the story and your message to me. Is it a writing error or a personal preference? Again, I'm not trying to shout you out or anything of the sort. I've been writing both fanfics and original stories on my own since I was very young, I'm now 16 in age and learned a while ago that to be a good writer, you have to think outside the box to catch peoples attention. I'm not saying that I'm better than you, I'm saying that I have more experience and learned from my mistakes. In conclusion, I think it would be best for you to take more time and think of an interesting twist for your story or any possible stories you might right in the future. I also suggest you to practice writing in real life to gain a better grasp of your style of writing. You're too focused on describing the Oc's personal story and personality that you forget to write about the main character, that's why his entire backstory was rushed in the beginning of the chapter. Trust me I've been there. Once more, I'm really not trying to be mean, I tend to be very blunt when I talk to people. I hope you take my advice in stride and become the better writer that you wish to be! Sincerely, Waffu~