sassyyMi

Hey! Mind checking out my book, In 11 days'? Any votes and comments will be encouraging!

sassyyMi

Thank you so much! 
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WallowingFlamingo

@EpicMe_56 I checked it out and I really like your characters. The writing gets much better through out the story but my one tip would be to vary sentuncd length and try to start with words other than I. I’ll go through it again and add a few comments!
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