Hello people! It's me again, Warmcolours, and remember when I said that I will be revising all my chapters one by one? Yes yes, I will, but I have a new and much better plan for fixing it! I will be dividing each scene into a much smaller chapter so the readers will find it easier to read! I understood that the more words you put would be more fabulous looking and stuff but I realised that this might make my readers go all to sleep HAHAH and I don't want you people to get bored!
My sister advised and told me that it's better to make the story slow-burn but not slow-paced! It'll be much harder for the others. I hope that this new plan of mine will get everyone happiness and will not feel bored all the time. Wish me luck, people! I'll do my best!