WatHoney

thanks for your support, dear! Today, as soon as I can, I vote for your story ♡

"Heartbeats And Hiccups" just made it to Wattpad’s 30DC Milestone reading list by @justwriteit, and I’m absolutely overwhelmed! ♡
          
          It has also been added to Judge's favorite list by @WackyWriters ♡
          
          This story is so close to my heart, and seeing it recognized means the world. Thank you to everyone who’s supported me—this is our win!
          
           
          ♧I am beyond thrilleddddd!♧

Read and you dusted the story author. ✨️

Thank you for your adding my poetry collection to your reading list ♡♡

          
          ✨ HEARTBEATS AND HICCUPS – RE-EDIT ALERT! ✨  
          
          
          Hey, my chaotic bookworms!  You know I adore you, right? 
          
          That’s why I’m about to SHAKE THINGS UP. I'VE re-editing chapters to make them spicier, smoother, and straight-up BETTER.   
          
          ALL THE SCENES HAVE CHANGED!!
          
          
          
          —Why?
          
          
          Because I re-read it and… OOF. Some parts were too slow, too predictable, and missing that ZING that keeps you glued to the screen. Let’s be real—y’all deserve a story that makes your heart race, not a bedtime lullaby.  
          
          SOOO, here’s what’s getting fixed!   
          
           PROBLEM: Pacing was dragging, too much internal monologue 
          
          ✅ FIX: More tension, more chaos, more ACTION!No more overthinking—just momentum that keeps things moving.  
          
           PROBLEM: Vince tracking Ava down yet not recognizing her at school? BOY, BE FR.  
          
          ✅ FIX:  More natural, high-stakes encounters that make it impossible for them to ignore each other.  
          
           PROBLEM: Alice’s menace was a slow burn that was too slow—girl, do SOMETHING already.   
          
          ✅ FIX: She strikes SOONER. You’ll feel her **creeping in before it’s too late.** No more passive villain vibes.   
          
           PROBLEM: Romance buildup was lacking early on 
          
          ✅ FIX: More subtle, flirty tension, forced proximity, and WHAT-ARE-THOSE-FEELINGS moments. You’ll see sparks flying earlier. ✨  
          
           PROBLEM: Too much of the same pattern—Vince finds Ava, she escapes, rinse, repeat ‍
           
          ✅ FIX: More varied, unpredictable interactions. Sometimes it’s funny, sometimes dangerous, sometimes wayyy too close for comfort.  
          
          
          
          —What This Means for YOU?
          
          
          
           Fresh updates are up, starting from Chapter 1!
          
          
           Faster, more intense storytelling that won’t let you breathe (in a good way )
          
          
           MORE REASONS TO YELL AT VINCE IN THE COMMENTS.
          
          
          
          DROP YOUR THOUGHTS BELOW! SCREAM. RANT. CRY. I’m here for ALL OF IT.   
          
          LET’S MAKE THIS STORY THE BEST IT CAN BE!

Dear Reader,
          
          Thank you for reading “The Downsides Of Popularity”. I hope you'll enjoy reading the rest of the chapters <3
          
          Don't forget to vote & comment your thoughts :)
          
          With love,
          Rose.

Hey I just noticed Heartbeats is #1 in personalthoughts <33333

⋆˚✿˖°Mornin' ⋆˚✿˖°

i completely forgot that you mentioned to update every friday, so i, panic-stricken, logged in today after four days, thinking i had missed updates from you :')

Hey! Just wanted to swing by and say thanks for the comments and votes on 'Medium Latte' <3