Oh, I didn’t see this till now! There is nothing you should improve on in your story! It’s just not my type of plot per-say? I am more of a romance reader of stories here on Wattpad and your story didn’t seem like I would be to interested in it as I’m really here for romance! That’s all. Thanks for not getting “triggered” like a few other’s I will not name! :)
-Sincerely,
Winston