@dreamybanana@Averie Thank you both for your complaints but we must stress that we are called WattyReview, meaning that we review stories rather then critique.
Thank you for your time,
WattyReview
Hey! I was wondering if you could read one, or both of my stories. They are called Changed and the other is The Wanted. It would be really helpful! Thanks!
so I just finished my first chapter of my book i'd like for someone tobread it as i'd like go get the idea of the target audience to fit it to their liking