@LunaLarkCygnus
I know! Honestly, I feel like the first five or six chapters could be shortened to one. I know that I have learned a lot in writing this, and now, looking ahead at the ending I have planned, I realize I'm going to have to go back and edit a LOT of it.
Thank you for sticking with it! Since my internet will be limited for the next week or so, hopefully I will get more writing done, but no promises!
As always, I love when people give constructive criticism to help me improve my work, so thanks!