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TYLER'S GEM by Hasan 
          	
          	
          	If you haven't yet read it then run and go read it.
          	Coz I totally loved it and wasn't able to lift my ass out of my chair and face from the laptop while reading it. It took me whole 2 days. It's a very long one tho.

WeWrite_

TYLER'S GEM by Hasan 
          
          
          If you haven't yet read it then run and go read it.
          Coz I totally loved it and wasn't able to lift my ass out of my chair and face from the laptop while reading it. It took me whole 2 days. It's a very long one tho.

snowbled

Greetings! 
          
          I read the first two chapters of your story, and I liked the idea on which your story is based, but I find many grammatical errors and repetitive words. 
          
          All I want to say is, you really need to work hard on all of that, and only hard work will bring you somewhere near good writing. Not that I am criticising, rather advicing. 
          
          Also, I would love it if you checked out my book, I would be really grateful! 
          
          Thank you and stay gold! 
          -S ❤

WeWrite_

@snowbled We can't be less thankful to you. I tried to correct few of them I guess. *smiles* 
             We will soon check your book and learn something. Thank you for giving us your advise, its precious. 
            Will you mind checking out our story and if you find mistakes then please note it there. We won't force you, its completely on you and if you have time. 
            Well, Thanks again. Cheers!
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