I am an aspiring author.  My weak point is romance, so I have tried my hands at a romance story.  I would really appreciate it if you would look over and criticize my writing.  Please BE HARSH.  I can't learn if people don't criticize.

If you message me, I'll almost certainly look over your work.  I like to read.

Here I have one story up; I plan to put more.

Thank you very much!