@Roro_Cano ah okay. I guess I'll just write and try to get a plot. And I'll read yours in the morning because it's late ish here and I'm kinda tired and I'll end up not focusing if I read now. Tomorrow I'll make sure to though. That alright with you?
@Roro_Cano oh yeah I'll need to fix my perspective stuff too. I know it's bad but I guess I can't help switching between perspectives. With more practice I will be able to I hope
@Roro_Cano nah advice is appreciated. So don't hesitate to criticise either.
I do know I need to do a plot and follow that but I can never think of a plot unfortunately lmao