WearyAndMary

I just gotta let this out for some reason.
          	I was crying. 
          	Black phone messed me tf up.
          	Robin and Finny’s friendship is top tier.
          	The part where robin was teaching finny how to fight with the phone broke me.
          	“This is the last call Finn.”

AsmaaCanWrite003

Hey ! I'm a new writer here  it would be my pleasure if you could read my story and rate it. Thank you in advance.

WearyAndMary

Question: How are you trying to write this story? I’m kinda confused on what’s going on in the story. 
            I want you to reply first so it doesn’t seem like I’m dropping so much on you. (No I’m not a true writer, I’m observant tho.)
Reply

WearyAndMary

I just gotta let this out for some reason.
          I was crying. 
          Black phone messed me tf up.
          Robin and Finny’s friendship is top tier.
          The part where robin was teaching finny how to fight with the phone broke me.
          “This is the last call Finn.”