lilacjuniper

Hi, you pointed out some good points in your title/blurb critique. I'm wondering - how do you think I could make the blurb so it's less revealing? Just a simple suggestion or something would be nice. Thanks, I appreciate the help! xx

lilacjuniper

@WelcomeToNevermore Okay, I see ! Thank you so much!
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WelcomeToNevermore

@WillowPaw1 my personal opinion is to make a statement in the blurb, not a summary. so instead of a plot summary take a few vague points that show a small part, save the good parts for the book. 
            if I were to write a romance I would say give a gut truth... like umm:
            
            It mad me mad. Love wasn't supposed to do that. Sure it's glorified with sunset walks, kissing in the rain, and Nicholas Sparks novels—  But there has to be some truth, right? Or am I lying to myself to make this okay? Or is the mad just me being madly in love...
            
            Sorry if that wasn't the best I pulled it out of my ass, but you see what I mean? Not a plot summary but a small taste. As for the title say away from those cliches. Think about the theme.
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