Nancy_818
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@Wendy-578 Hi! Just checking in after latest ITA chapter… I saw your comments on ITA. I was so frustrated reading those alleged romantic memories of Emily. Too little, way too late, in my opinion. We all begged the author to weave in anything ‘loving’ in Book 1, and now it’s so late, his memories cause scoffing not swooning. They’re not plausible after all of his behavior. Frankly, they’re also not the slightest bit romantic. He seems to focus on Emily’s flaws in his memories, more than positive traits or experiences. We’re in chapter 30 (!!) and he’s just now having sentimental thoughts. I like him less and less each chapter. And Jonah wanting to go camping in November in Wisconsin is insane. Talk about not plausible. I’m very frustrated by the plot, or lack thereof. And L saying there’s some important chapters coming up actually annoyed me only because we’ve been subjected to so much unnecessary filler! Just give us something worthwhile then! If she maintains this pace, the book will not be done for 10 Months! Please tell me she’s not going to do that to us. I still don’t get the constant, oh I have to rewrite and re-edit so many months after she claimed it was done. And yet, even with the alleged re-edits, there are problems like the missing sentence(s) in chapter 30. Sorry to swing by to rant, I’m just frustrated and disappointed at the same time. Hope you’re doing well!
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@nancy_818 I tagged you in a post on the last chapter because I’m completely sick of the David sympathy . I don’t have much faith at this point
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Honestly he’s just pathetic. I see nothing showing us he feels remorse or ever really wanted Emily. Not be an is British thing you can’t tell someone to their face you never loved them and used them to fill a void and they meant nothing to you? Ave had to ask these questions in order to get him to respond. I firmly believe she does not know how to write David and I don’t think she knows how to write Emily. She definitely knows how to write Ava. David can’t initiate a conversation. David can’t do any small or big ax to show Emily that he cares, his inner monologue is all bullshit and not to mention his regular dialogue is all bullshit because he can’t complete a fucking sentence.. Excuse my language. He should’ve walked into that restaurant with Ava and asked why the fuck am I here and he should’ve said right then and there do not contact me. Don’t talk to me at work. Don’t speak to me and shut her down hard, but he seemed more like a gloom teenager stuck in his solemn ways and you have to pull information from him because he doesn’t wanna talk and use his big boy words.
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