@Ezria54565 aw thanks you, It's a bittersweet short story. I hope you enjoyed it. I'm currently reading your story the coach and I'm enjoying it so far. I haven't written anything recent, to busy with current events, but I hope you continue to write. And don't be afraid to put real emotion into your characters, that's what brings them to life. I cried while writing some of my stories, it's as though I am the character and I feel what they feel. I encourage you to see how you can take your writing to te next step. And remember you are te creator of your world in your story, don't be afraid to shine! :)