sugarcoatqueen
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Hi! I'm sorry for the late reaction about your book. I've been busy for quite a few days. Haha! Anyway, I really love your story description. It is very unique. :) I don't have anything to advice to you except that you have to make your narration seem more natural. It will help if you read more English books published outside Wattpad. I'm sure you'll pick up a trick or two just by reading a book :) X Kat