galarussauthor
Do you do read for reads? I loved your comments on Endless Love. Felt like you really thought about your suggestions. I am just starting out and any feedback would be great!
WhatAJoy85
@GalaRu57 Okay! No problem, link me your story again in pm's and I will start on it tomorrow!
galarussauthor
@WhatAJoy85 Not yet, we started messaging about it and I started doing edits on your Building Neverland. I only have one thing (A to B). Looking for more plot development and plot movement help. I just re-write chapter 1 based on other people comments. Chapters 5-7 are the worst though, in my opinion. Pretty much straight dialogue. You do the descriptions so well and I definitely need help in that area. :(