Kakralek17

Hey ma once again great job on another amazing amazing chapter of the Spider-Man Jurassic world chaos theory story that one was really good I’m so glad Brooklyn apologized to Peter and he gave a smile

Kakralek17

But anyway great job can’t wait for the next chapter
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What_If_Universe

@Kakralek17 Figured he was owed one. After... everything
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Cartoonicle

Hey, I saw your Freeze it, Elsa story and I was wonder if I could talk to you about it

What_If_Universe

@Cartoonicle I’ll consider it. Don’t do much reading but check them out when I can
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Cartoonicle

@What_If_Universe It’s called ‘Danny’s Channel Travel Adventures with Mabel Pines’ if you wanna check it out,. If you want to that is
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What_If_Universe

@Cartoonicle okay it’s been longer than that. Gos I didn’t realize jist how long 
            
            Every once in a while people comment. This is one of the sites as I’m mostly set on the fanficiton site itself. 
            
            The idea sounds cool
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marvelousand2

Are you open to suggestions and ideas sir ?

What_If_Universe

@marvelousand2 3. I actually have a different idea for how to take that scene. But don't want to spoil if I get back into it
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marvelousand2

@What_If_Universe 1. I do. Maybe Peter could be angry at Oliver and Sara for starting the whole mess. If they never went on the Gambit(Oliver cheating on Laurel and Sara wanting to get back at Laurel) his life wouldn't have been a tragedy. Thea disowned Peter after Season 1, they did reconcile in Season 2, but something like that doesn't go away.
            
            2. In the Arrowverse, Batman disappeared in 2015. Here's an idea. Maybe Peter sought him out after Season 1 for help on how to be a vigilante or his experience of the Multiverse made Peter aware of Batman's existence. Maybe learned about other Metas after he became Spider-Man. Maybe Peter would be holding Ra's al Ghul off before Oliver strikes the final blow. These are just ideas.
            
            3. Since Sara died trying to save Peter, would Laurel and the League of Shadows blame him?
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Kakralek17

Hey man once again great job on another chapter of the Spider-Man Jurassic world chaos theory story that was really good and bro WHAT Mayday has powers now??? WHAT??? Ok th next chapter is definitely going to be good great job keep it up

Kakralek17

Hey man great job on another amazing chapter of the Spider-Man Jurassic world chaos theory story and the fight of Spider-Man and venom be change was INCREDIBLE like that was insane great job and I wasn’t expecting to see at the end that Yaz was holding mayday and gave her to Peter like I was in shocked like what anyways great job keep it up can’t wait for the next chapter

Kakralek17

Welcome keep it up
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What_If_Universe

@Kakralek17 Thanks. Always happy to keep people guessing what comes next
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Kakralek17

Hey man nice job on another amazing chapter of the Spider-Man Jurassic world chaos theory story like I was shocked to see the way how Peter reacted seeing Brooklyn alive and now a VENOM AND SPIDER-MAN TEAM UP??? OH YESSS can’t wait for the next chapter keep it up

Kakralek17

Alright can’t wait for the next chapter later
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What_If_Universe

@Kakralek17 yep, this was a fun one to write. And ironically, I almost went the same route as the show, meaning this wouldn't have happened until the next chapter
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