Whatdoiputhereandwhy

@Whatdoiputhereandwhy true, and there is a book of it.. oh boy Bri'ish time

@ALocalPrometheusUnit yes

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@IamRussianMan no thank you for asking me feedback

@Whatdoiputhereandwhy Thank you and I will keep those in mind when I do the rewrite.

@IamRussianMan I did read the whole book and I really like the world building elements of the book but there always room for improvement and you could also add more emotional impact like the pain because getting your bones obliterated by a hammer would do a lot more than just throwing off your aim. Another thing to make the story better is to add lore to the characters or a backstory to them or something like that to really spice up the story a bit