Whatlonghair

Elias and Oswin's mother, the Snow Queen, has undergone a name change. Her name has been changed from Gerte to Ishild.

I have made some edits to Chapter One, Two, and Three today. Corrected some punctuation and added in a little more to the scenes to make the story's cohesion more effective.

"DEFIANCE" will be getting some revisions in the next two days in terms of the name of Heimdall. The name will be changed from Heimdall/Heimdallian to Eskkerlend/Eskker.

"DEFIANCE" will be getting some revisions in the next two days in terms of the name of the Celtlands. The name will be changed from Celtlands/Celtish to Cantabreann/Cantish.

So I’ve spent basically three days going over what I have so far with “Take It On the Run” because I’ve hit a major roadblock with the story. I actually had the story printed out so I could mark all over it, and after combing through everything and putting red ink everywhere, I realized that I hadn’t done the story justice. The first chapter felt so rushed, and I hadn’t really introduced the main character, Jay, properly. So I went back and rewrote the beginning, and, after doing so, I am much happier with the result.
          
          To my fans, I know you were keeping close track of the story, and this means that you’ll probably be reading parts over again, but at least, this time, you’ll be getting a meatier story, and not something strung together.
          
          I hope you enjoy what I’ve done with it, and apologize for taking you all back to the very start.

You can now listen to the fantrack for "Take It On The Run" on youtube!
          https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kPbbfmILrQo&list=PLjodnrM-i0iB10Xk0-wfhArpy8yzOuxCr

Working on the next chapter. Usually I’m faster at this but with school and volunteering going on, I haven’t had much time. Hope to get the new chapter out by late Friday night.