WhimsiquillWriter

We have finally come to the end...
          	
          	I started "The Unhappy Heart" almost 10 years ago, and through those years it went through many drastic changes.  I revised and edited multiple versions, and this was the first time I have allowed another person besides myself to read it. 
          	
          	It is not perfect, but it is my first. 
          	
          	I hope you all enjoy the story and I look forward to seeing your thoughts. I am in the process of writing the second story, but am holding off on publishing until I receive enough feedback from the first. 
          	To help me improve and write a better sequel, feedback is very much appreciated.

WhimsiquillWriter

We have finally come to the end...
          
          I started "The Unhappy Heart" almost 10 years ago, and through those years it went through many drastic changes.  I revised and edited multiple versions, and this was the first time I have allowed another person besides myself to read it. 
          
          It is not perfect, but it is my first. 
          
          I hope you all enjoy the story and I look forward to seeing your thoughts. I am in the process of writing the second story, but am holding off on publishing until I receive enough feedback from the first. 
          To help me improve and write a better sequel, feedback is very much appreciated.

WhimsiquillWriter

To my dear readers, 
          
          As we are approaching the end of The Unhappy Heart, I have decided to release two chapters today, two tomorrow, and the last one will be published on Tuesday as usual. 
          
          Book 2 is in progress, so any feedback and critique on the ending will be extremely useful in helping me continue the second book. I would also like to hear if there were certain characters or elements you hope to see explored more.

WhimsiquillWriter

I am officially back again. I realised I had been updating with an older version of my story, and that I had lost the proper one. Thankfully, my brother had a copy, and there were only minor changes to be made with the chapters I had already updated. 
          So, I am back on track and will continue updating every Tuesday and Friday.