WhisperingSoul_Payal

Hello everyone,
          	
          	I am excited to share my new story, "His Second Bride," with you all. Your support means a lot to me, and I would be grateful if you could take the time to read it.
          	
          	His Second Bride: https://www.wattpad.com/story/372636072-his-second-bride?utm_source=web&utm_medium=twitter&utm_content=share_myworks&wp_uname=WhisperingSoul_Payal  
          	
          	As this is one of my first attempts at writing, your feedback and encouragement will help me improve and continue my journey as a writer. I hope you enjoy the story and find it engaging.
          	
          	Thank you so much for your support!
          	
          	Thank you!

SHAYRA18SAMI

I just simply hate when some random people come on in and talks nonsense about the story or the characters or even author! That's sooo disrespectful! She spends sooo much time thinking & writing it's not easy dude! Atleast have some courtesy! I feel sooo sorry for writer... Please if you don't like the concept or story kindly stop reading it rather than nagging everywhere making her sad or thoughtful!!!!!

misscharan00

@SHAYRA18SAMI hey nobody has said anything nonsense about author, but its just that when you read a story there are some characters which you can relate and like them due to which you become bias  towards them even though they are shown as negative . And i think that is good for author because she has justified the characters  of the story very well. that even negative characters are praised by others, so author take it in a positive way and continue writing this story.
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ruhanishah42

well author just one question .. kumudini was brought in for their selfish reason of having a royal bride for mahender . yet she is the one suffering as if its her mistake that her husband cheated upon her and homewreacker kinjal is no more . why should she accept a homewreacker’s daughter as her own ?? her father in laws expectations are not justified . earlier the whore kinjal wreaked kumudini’s life and now her so called pure and sweet daughter will destroy revati’s life . like mother like daughter .. husband snatchers . she could have said no fir wedding but she has her selfish motive too but in the end kumudini and revati will end in despair and a homewreaker and cheater filth will get all — a child , a husband fully devoted to her so called innocence and her family .. what kumudini did to suffer this ?? if mahender’s love for kinjal was so purr why didn’t he committed suicide instead of destroying a life ?? but no that man is  selfish his kinjal is selfish as she wanted her love and then their so called daughter a symbol if their cheating and selfishness is also selfish .. but only kumudini and revati will suffer .. what kind of karma are you showing to readers ?? that do bad deeds and god will shower you with rewards ?  i hope you understand that karma comes back to each and every person if not sooner then later . dont write to just write . leave a social msg

Sadhna456

When every writer writes a polygamy story why degrade one woman to show and justify the love for another woman?
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SHAYRA18SAMI

@Mazaama okaaay my bad fine i am soorrryy i apologize please forgive me you are great you are god am devil satan fine forgive me mazaama i beg you
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Mazaama

@SHAYRA18SAMI Why? Just like you have rights to give your opinion as readers if the story we have rights too. The author will decide whatever she wants. You are a nobody. We will give our opinion/ thoughts/ decisions/analysis everything regarding this story. If you don’t want to read then mute us.
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SHAYRA18SAMI

Thankyou sooo much dear author for uploading new chap of the story! It's really appreciative!! God bless & please I request if possible please update everyday or when you are free okaaay bcz it's an outstanding plot story too much eagerness to read tho.... Waiting patiently.... Take care ❤