WhiteWumpus

Wow, I did not post for a while! Lucky I know nobody was paying attention ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
          	Having one of those days where Wattpad just won't bring me to the "write" page, but it doesn't matter, I'm writing a new book in google docs. I'll set a goal for myself: if I can get five chapters done in three weeks at any time during the writing process, I'll post the unfinished book. Not like it'd get discovered, frequent posts or not though.
          	Anyway, happy writing everybody, thanks for reading!

WhiteWumpus

Wow, I did not post for a while! Lucky I know nobody was paying attention ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
          Having one of those days where Wattpad just won't bring me to the "write" page, but it doesn't matter, I'm writing a new book in google docs. I'll set a goal for myself: if I can get five chapters done in three weeks at any time during the writing process, I'll post the unfinished book. Not like it'd get discovered, frequent posts or not though.
          Anyway, happy writing everybody, thanks for reading!

lianawritestories

Hello, good day! I'm here to introduce one of my stories that is written in English and Tagalog language, it would mean so much to me if you will leave a comment, vote, and a review regarding this story, your support will be truly appreciated for a young inspiring improving writer like me.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/304966504?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=lianawritestories

WhiteWumpus

@lianawritestories, Hey! Thanks for engaging with my profile—even just to plug! I checked out your story (I skimmed the last chapter to examine the most developed prose and story), and it's definitely worth the read for somebody with some extra time on their hands. The structure is flawed in places and often slightly confusing or simply unexciting, but it's cut from better cloth than most of WP, and I'm definitely very interested in watching your abilities grow! Not to mention, even if your book wasn't absolutely passable, your heart's in the right place :)
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WhiteWumpus

I am currently in Kentucky on vacation, not that I have a schedule to interrupt anyway. Anybody who wants an authentic bowl of dead ticks drowned in rubbing alcohol, just tell me, as long as you intend to drink it. I may be picking up on writing again soon-ish, not entirely sure. Goodnight, literally anybody who cares.

WhiteWumpus

@WhiteWumpus, Yeah! Thanks for asking! How're you doing?  
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novelistASH

@WhiteWumpus That sounds like a fatal beverage. Are you having a fun vacation?
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novelistASH

I was looking at your stuff and I have too much to say. I can be extra and I don't want to overwhelm you.
          What kind of feedback are you looking for right now?
          What aspects of your writing are you actively trying to improve?
          What are you short term writing goals?
          
          If these questions are unwelcomed I apologize and I will fade off into the mist.

WhiteWumpus

@novelistASH, Thank you so much for the interest! 
            In terms of feedback, I want what's true, of course, but I'd most appreciate any feedback you have on my first chapter of "ARCTIC", because I'm already aware of a lot of problems with "Out of the Dark",  and I'm pretty interested in your insights on it considering it's probably my best writing—although it's just a first draft, plus that can't really be measured.
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